REFLECTION TASK 3
If I
were a jury member of the committee choosing the person of the year, I would
choose Nelson Mandela who was a South African anti-apartheid, which means racial
segregation, revolutionary, politician, activist, lawyer, and philanthropist,
who served as President of South Africa from 1994 to 1999. There are lots of
reasons of that. First and foremost, he was willing to
sacrifice his freedom, his dignity the safety of his family and every earthly
possession to prove to the world the sufferings and in dignity suffered by
those subjected to apartheid. His
courageous, selfless actions brought knowledge to many who were unaware of the
power struggle in South Africa and the huge human toll that it took. The
strongest characteristic of Nelson Mandela would be defiance. I think that his activist stance against
Apartheid policies demonstrates this. Nelson Mandela was also an astounding
human being willing to sacrifice everything to do the apartheid in South
Africa. Mandela was also a rare visionary who would see beyond the current struggles
and pain. He was convinced that one day the best parts of humanity would
prevail over the worst parts. He even inspired his enemies to be better than
they had been through forgiveness and reconciliation. Because of his being
black person, he dedicated himself to fight against racism. Instinctively,
Mandela knew skin color was cosmetic. He knew men and women were equal. He knew skin color was evidence of race, not
character, which is the biggest reason why I think that Nelson Mandela who died
in the last month of 2013 deserves being chosen the person of the year.
Canım,
ReplyDeleteI chose this article because I was wondering who you had chosen as the person of the year. I think you have done a great job revealing us who Mandela was and what he did and when! I can tell that I have learned some things! I found it very informative! I liked your language use and content! Since I want you to become a great teacher, I want to show you some minor flaws I have found. I found a few grammatical mistakes (not that I know better).
In this sentence; First and foremost, he was willing to sacrifice his freedom, his dignity the safety of his family and every earthly possession to prove to the world the sufferings and in dignity suffered by those subjected to apartheid.
dignity, the safety...
The sufferings subjected to apartheid.
In this part: inspired his enemies to be better than they had been through forgiveness and reconciliation
You could put a comma to prevent misunderstaning. Here:
better than they had been, through forgiveness and reconciliation
Other than that I think it is a great paragraph!
Nicely done! .)
Honey,
ReplyDeleteFirstly, your commenting on my reflection made me happy :) Thanks for your good comments and helping me see my mistakes. I'll correct them immediately.
Take care of you :*